Page 1
NATALY looking over her shoulder with a frightened look.
Wide view; NATALY running down an alleway
NATALY stumbling over trash at the end of the alleyway
NATALY fallen on the ground stomach down, but propping herself up to rollover
Page 2
Wide view; NATALY rolls over stomach up, her arms stretched back so that she is propped up and scrambling back as a Corrupted looms over her
Silhouette of NATALY on the ground with the Corrupted on top of her as blood sprays from the head/mouth looking as if the Corrupted had bitten NATALY
NATALY pushes the Corrupted's limp body off of her
ANDREW is looking down with his arm at a right angle holding up a smoking handgun
Close up; ANDREW's hand grasping NATALY's, helping her up
Page 3
ANDREW standing with NATALY stabilizing her by the arm.
ANDREW
You okay?
NATALY
I-I think so.
ANDREW helping NATALY with her arm over his shoulders.
ANDREW
Listen, we've got to get somewhere safe okay?
NATALY
Mhm...
ANDREW
(Cont)
Stay with me.
Close up on NATALY with her eyes nearly closed.
ANDREW
(OP)
Come on. You can't sleep now.
ANDREW is carrying NATALY in his arms
Looking up at ANDREW through a small opening as if through NATALY's closing eyes
Page 4
ANDREW is sitting over NATALY who is laying on a cot inside of a basement
Looking up at ANDREW
ANDREW
Finally you're awake.
Looking down on NATALY's face
NATALY
Wh-where am I?
ANDREW
(OP)
My humble home, or at least it has been for the last few weeks.
Pile of canned and dried food
ANDREW
Got about two weeks worth of supplies...
NATALY lying on the cot
ANDREW
(OP)
...and a comfortable place to sleep.
NATALY sitting up next to ANDREW
NATALY
I-I don't even know who you are.
ANDREW
Name's Andrew.
NATALY
(cont)
Why are you here? I mean, why didn't you leave with the rest?
Page 5
Close up of ANDREW
ANDREW
Truth is, it was my mom...
ANDREW walking up the stairs with a tray carrying a small cup of pills and a glass of water
Five weeks ago
Looking over MOM, laying on the bed, to the door
ANDREW
*Knock-knock*
MOM
Com-*cough* Come in.
ANDREW sitting on the bed's edge preparing MOM's medicines.
ANDREW
You feeling all right?
MOM
Of course dear.
ANDREW extends a glass of water and the small cup of pills
ANDREW
Make sure you take all of these.
ANDREW gets up to leave
MOM
Before you leave, could you turn on the TV for me?
Page 6
Close up on the remote turning on the TV
TV screen displaying a newscast with the headline story "The Corrupted" with the corrupteds' picture next to the title
ANDREW
(OP)
What the hell?
TV screen with images of the police fighting off the corrupted.
ANCHOR
Their origins as well as their motives remain unknown, but we do know they are extremely violent.
TV screen with small image of corrupted and the Anchor broadcasting
ANCHOR
Police are urging all civilians to lock up their houses and remain inside.
MOM looking at the back of ANDREW as he blocks the TV
MOM
What's going on dear? You know I can't hear well.
Page 7
MOM's house with a group of corrupted outside
Two weeks ago
From the Attic we see ANDREW's head and arm reaching through grabbing a handgun and clips.
Over MOM on the bed we see ANDREW closing the door
ANDREW pulls the vanity in front of the door.
Page 8
A CORRUPTED's hand breaks through the front door.
MOM
(OP)
Listen Andrew.
A CORRUPTED has its body half way through the door.
MOM
(OP)
You have taken care of me long enough.
The CORRUPTED climbing the stairs
MOM
(OP)
Now hand it to me.
The CORRUPTED outside of the bedroom door
MOM
(OP)
I told you where to find it, now hand it to me!
ANDREW hands MOM the handgun.
MOM
(OP)
It's time for you to take care of yourself.
ANDREW
Mom, no!
Page 9
MOM laying on the bed with a bullet hole in her forehead.
ANDREW weeping over MOM's body
ANDREW
No mom, no...
The vanity fallen over onto the ground
Close up of ANDREW looking up towards the door
Page 10
Close up of ANDREW taking the gun from his MOM's hand
An open window with the curtains blowing
ANDREW sliding down the roof of his home
ANDREW squatted down with his hands on his head, gun in one hand















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I'd like to someday see more of this.
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Knowledge is power, and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil!
This genre is difficult to undertake, and then again be original in this day and age of zombie/vamp/werewolf/demon media. these 'corrupted' being something completely new and unseen before could bring some unique-ness to this piece. but otherwise, follow your heart, if you get physically pumped about this story while creating it, then it's good. if not...gotta do the tweaking to get it to that point.
keep up the good work.
I totally agree to the genre being difficult as pertains to individual and innovative ideas, but the story will develop into much more than just a zombie-esque survival horror. I have the arc built in my head with political issues and big ideas about peace and chaos and war and human nature, it's the in between that I still have to write.
I'm just hoping that I can get people to read far enough into the thing to discover that it is much more than a simple survival horror graphic novel. What do you think about short sections where we see a little bit of what the government is doing, or little other things just to let the reader know that there is more to it?
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really just go with your gut and what YOU think is best.
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